tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4921017530092461009.post3272385371081423216..comments2023-11-02T16:05:06.278-04:00Comments on Michael's Scroll: Pavilion next to a bike path / Pavillon auprès d'une piste cyclableMichael Lukyniukhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14027697373573737570noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4921017530092461009.post-60449473307392029882015-08-19T13:21:54.071-04:002015-08-19T13:21:54.071-04:00Nice scene, but the pavillion is floating in the a...Nice scene, but the pavillion is floating in the air. (if you don't mind my remarks) you should have made changes in the colour of the grass. Check a picture: grass next to a path will be different from the rest of the lawn, if only because it's cut in a different way. the grass is always a little higher (which means a shadow) or lower (then the grass is longer, and the colour will be a little different.<br />The same for the pavillion base: the grass will normally be darker around the platform, not lighter.<br />I loved the tiger lily drawing: nice how you achieved depth by making the background less defined.Rene Fijtenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01994125490311431495noreply@blogger.com